...Really?
Jan. 7th, 2009 09:17 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
salienneI used the phrase "Staring in shock" in my novel. I can't believe I did that, even when I wrote this scene about two years ago. That's just... well, it's not on par with my gigantic malevolent looming gopher, but it's bad.
Although I did just have a character say "Fair is fair," but as that's dialogue and he's a bit of a pretentious git, I think it works.
(And yes, this does mean I'm finally editing. It's just taking forever, and I keep playing with Stumble or getting up to pace for no apparent reason. Hoorah!)
ETA: L.A. Without a Map, in which we have David Tennant (as an undertaker) and Johnny Depp in the same movie.
COULD THIS BE ANY MORE AWESOME?!
Although I did just have a character say "Fair is fair," but as that's dialogue and he's a bit of a pretentious git, I think it works.
(And yes, this does mean I'm finally editing. It's just taking forever, and I keep playing with Stumble or getting up to pace for no apparent reason. Hoorah!)
ETA: L.A. Without a Map, in which we have David Tennant (as an undertaker) and Johnny Depp in the same movie.
COULD THIS BE ANY MORE AWESOME?!
