Jan. 7th, 2009

...Really?

Jan. 7th, 2009 09:17 pm
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I used the phrase "Staring in shock" in my novel. I can't believe I did that, even when I wrote this scene about two years ago. That's just... well, it's not on par with my gigantic malevolent looming gopher, but it's bad.

Although I did just have a character say "Fair is fair," but as that's dialogue and he's a bit of a pretentious git, I think it works.

(And yes, this does mean I'm finally editing. It's just taking forever, and I keep playing with Stumble or getting up to pace for no apparent reason. Hoorah!)

ETA: L.A. Without a Map, in which we have David Tennant (as an undertaker) and Johnny Depp in the same movie.

COULD THIS BE ANY MORE AWESOME?!

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